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I really liked how you interpreted the lyrics for the visual elements. Would have liked more work on the visual quality, but I enjoyed it all the same.
Keep creating :)
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lol.
if you liked it why did you put 5/10?
just pointing it out...
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Animation technique was good. The lip sync was notibly good as well. Work on your drawing a little. Great song choice :)
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There's nothing wrong with a short animation. I think your scene planing was good, and your animation technique was fairly smooth.
Taking the length of the animation into account, I would have hoped for a little more work in the detailing of the objects of the animation. I had to watch the animation twice to see that the Linux penguin started off wielding a sword (thought it was a pipe the first time). I think a little work into shading and highlighting would make all the difference :)
Also, remember to cite songs used at the end somewhere (song name + performer). I for one have been trying to get ahold of that track for a long time, and would really appreciate knowing who preformed it so I can find it :)
This could make a great series of short animations. Please make more if you get the chance.
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